Tuesday, 23 October 2018

Bake Sale

WALT: Make a poster for Bake Sale. WALF: Things that will hook the buyers

5 comments:

  1. I really like how you used lots of bright colours which makes the poster really stand out. Did you think about putting capitals letters in the right places. Next time you could use a less colourful background just to make the actually point of the poster stand out instead of all the colourful pictures. How well did you do at the bake sale?

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  2. I liked the way you have stated what food there is going to be.
    This reminded me of the time I had a party with this kind of food.
    Next time you could state where the place is.
    Why did you make it uneven with the pictures.

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  4. I like your poster and how colourful it was. It was really good, I like your background.

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  5. I like the way you layed it all out.
    Did you think about maybe adding more detail?
    Next time, you could add a bit more thing than just 3 things.
    Why did you decide to do something so cool?

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