The arrival of the devils.

In this I am trying to recreate the story on the Maori gardeners perspective what it was like when Captain Cook arrived. On a school trip we walked down to the Waikanae beach/stream to imagine what it was like when the harbour wasn't there and imagined the vision of when the Endeavour arrived to think of what it would have looked like. The challenge I find in writing this piece is that I couldn't really think of what it would have been like for the maori but I wanted to so I could make a more interesting writing piece. Today my goal in manaiakalani was that I really wanted to make a cool piece of writing that hooked the reader.